If you followed me during my NaNoWriMo Tweets last November, you might remember these tweets:
So I had a plan for #cgbittersweet. I thought I had figured out all the angles. Except now Elizabeth keeps talking and creating problems. I think I’m gonna to have to add another chapter to make her stop. #crimsonglass #NaNoWriMo
— Melissa (LissieLove) (@crimsonglass) November 13, 2017
I wasn’t planning on a #liason argument in this scene, but then Elizabeth had a glass of wine and started to tell Jason what she really thought. And now this scene is almost 2k and not over yet. Woops. #crimsonglass
— Melissa (LissieLove) (@crimsonglass) November 12, 2017
Chapter Sixteen, with the scene on the Brownstone at the end of the chapter is the scene this tweet referred to. I did add another chapter, but I realized I had to do more with the Jason and Elizabeth conflict. So I cut that scene in half and rewrote the chapters. I had to lose part of the story and about 5000 words.
So to make up for the lack of workshop and late chapters, I’ve given you about four deleted scenes. I hope you enjoy: Bittersweet, Deleted Scenes
Comments
I have enjoyed reading Bittersweet, but I have a question. Will you be doing any work on another story I fell in love with A King’s Command? I really love that time period and the story.