Update Link: Hits Different – Part 8

Whoops! I completely forgot that I switched Flash Fiction to Wednesdays last night. In my defense, the whole week has dragged so hard that I’m not sure what day any day is. That’s that mid-December school blues. We’re all just trying to survive one more week until break.

I’ll be honest with you guys, last week’s update didn’t feel like my best work. (You guys are always too nice to say it, but I’m sure some of you thought so, too). I had a plan for the story and I changed it up mid-writing (which happens in Flash Fiction) so some of this is happening in ways I hadn’t thought about. I’m mostly writing my way through it, so last week felt like me trying to figure out exactly what was going on, lol. But I feel like I’m going to get back on track tonight.

Originally, I was going to have Liz and Jason work together longer (maybe a week or two) before he finds that letter — and then he’d go to the apartment, and they’d fight more, and he’d be more suspicious of her motives, but then I was setting that up and all of a sudden, I had Jason confronting her with the letter, and then I wrote that part with Jason’s POV and the idea that he’d be more receptive to his past if he was finding it out for himself, and I had to readjust on the fly.

Anyway, I’m working it out, and I appreciate your patience as I do 🙂 See you next week!

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